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Disturbed
Disturbed
Disturbed has a deep voice that doesn’t want you.
Disturbed wears black all over and looks you directly in the eye.
Disturbed’s pet dog is called Grumpy, he never stops barking.
Disturbed’s brothers are Angry and Annoyed.
Disturbed’s house has no walls or doors.
Disturbed enemies are Delighted and Bubbly.
Disturbed can sometimes turn into Frustrated even Revolting.
Disturbed doesn’t like people because he wants to be by himself.
By Tyrone Taylor
Shovel in my head!
Shovel in my Head
It was a cold and frosty morning when my brother and I were mowing the lawns, I was picking up the disgusting rubbish on the ground. Moving stuff that gets in the way. The stupid thing was I put the shovel on the fence,The shovel fell on my head, it got stuck! I had to go to the hospital to have the shovel taken out of my head and get my head wound glued back together.
By Duane Iosefa
Save it for someone who believes you
Save It For Someone Who Believes You
Your always quiet,
Your sometimes sick,
But you somehow make me laugh.
You're mostly silent,
You're really quick,
But you think you're really tough.
By Jonathan
Term1 memories
First Rewards Day
Nice and hot, perfect day. Classes outside having fun. Us, baking, talking, laughing and playing games. Our lovely teacher helping us bake delicious muffins and giving us scrumptious garlic bread, hot from the oven.Laughing as we chase each other around the field, Freedom.
Stream trip
A long, but enjoyable walk to the stream. counting rubbish, drains and other things. Now we're finally here. Meeting people that work for the Auckland Regional Council. Amazed by the new information that wewere being told. Leaving, but lucky enough to have fun on the playground.
Making the soccer team
Yes! Made the soccer team. After all my hard work training at home, it finally paid off.I probably got picked for my teamwork skills, soccer skills and my behaviour in and out of the classroom. I feel happy and excited to be in the soccer team.However, a bit sorry for the boys that didn’t make it.
By Christian
Freedom
Freedom
Flying in cool, cold air, feeling the breeze coming from every direction.
Naturally crazy as he slides down the icy path, on his avalanche escape.
Freedom doesn’t like rules, most of all not school rules
His friends are Open and Zingy.
His enemies are Apprehensive and Lost.
His pet tiger does as it is told, it doesn’t live in a cage and never eats anyone.
By TOPAZ
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